Had to correct sentences so the parallel ideas are expressed1. Is it true that Superman could leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive, and those bullets would bounce off his skin?2. To celebrate the canned pork product called Spam, we attended the Texas Spamarama Festival to participate in the Spambalays cook off, the Spam slab toss, the Spam relay race, and were dancing to such favorites as “twist and Snout.”3. My Aunt Clara swears she has seen Elvis snacking at the deli, browsing at the supermarket, munching at the pizza parlor, and in the cookbook section of a local bookstore.4. According to my husband, summer air in Louisiana is 2 percent oxygen, 8 percent water and 90 percent mosquitoes.5. Many teachers believe that the most important keys to success for students in college include attending class, keep up with reading assignments, and being brave enough to ask questions. 6. Yoga encourages its participants to work on their flexibility, strength, and how they can reduce there stress levels.7. Drivers should hang up their cell phones; refrain from eating and drinking too, leaving the radio buttons alone.8. Smart people learn from their own mistakes; learning from the mistakes of others is what even smarter people do. 9. Theater class helped me overcome my shyness, make new friends, and my confidence to do other activities was improved.10. The writer Oscar Wilde, the dancer Isadora Duncan, the painter Max Ernst, and Jim Morrison, who was a rock star, are all buried in the same Paris cemetery. Thank you
The original sentence and correcttion can be found here. Is it true that Superman can leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive, and shoot bullets off his skin at enemies? Is it true that Superman can leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive, and shoot bullets into his skin, if he so chooses?
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correct 1 again 1. Is it true that Superman could run faster than a speeding bullet, more powerful than a locomotive and able to leap tall buildings in a single bound?
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The original sentence and correcttion can be found here. Is it true that Superman can leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive, and shoot bullets off his skin at enemies? Is it true that Superman can leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive and that bullets can bounce of his chest?
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See you are describing something? Each of those sentances has been accounted for. Would you rattle off a list of things that could happen if someone were listening to you? No, it's not true! You would notice one thing that occurs. The super man can run faster than a bullet. You would say that is not it with a joining word like but or and. This will make them pay more attention. This is the final part of it. Superman can run faster than a bullet, he can leap tall buildings in a single bound, and he is more powerful than a locomotive. Is it comprehend vouz?
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Tina showed you some great examples. We will be glad to check your records.
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I corrected sentence #1 is this correct 1.It is true that Superman could leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive, and those bullets could bounce off his skin.
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The final correction has been made. Is it true that Superman can leap tall building, run faster than a locomotive and have a bullet bounce off of his skin?
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I corrected sentence #1 is this correct 1.It is true that Superman could leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive, and those bullets could bounce off his skin.
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The original sentence and correcttion can be found here. Is it true that Superman can leap tall buildings, run faster than a locomotive, and shoot bullets off his skin at enemies? Is it true that Superman could leap tall building, run faster than a locomotive and that bullet would bounce off his chest if he did that?
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